Circe ([info]circe_tigana) wrote,
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A thin line between madness and genius

[info]rabid1st shares my new obsession and has pinpointed what makes Captain Jack so grand: the way he moves, the way he talks, he's drugged and sexy and swishy!

Man, this is totally getting me back into the historical romance novel mood. ::eyes plotless wonder with interested speculation::

Huzzah!

Without further ado, may I present:

The Longest Night
by: Circe

Summary: Seven years in the future, Elizabeth finds the man who haunts her dreams. (For that, read: Another patented Circe makes Elizabeth find herself piece(tm).) Spoilers for the movie Pirates of the Caribbean.



She finds him in Tortuga.

The inn near the docks is disreputable, violent, and smells faintly of coppery blood and sex. She’s directed here by several men, and several women. Ask by the water, and everyone’s heard of Captain Jack Sparrow.

She doesn’t inquire as to their business with him, and they hold their curiousity about hers. After all, to the casual eye, she is one of their own: ragged shawl, filthy skirts, breasts served amid a bed of cheap lace like melons on a platter. Rough, country accents, and broken fingernails.

She’s in Tortuga, and it’s like she could have been born there. But she’s only there for him.

Elizabeth Swann Turner pushes her way through the thronging sailors and the cat-calling whores, all the time searching for the face that has haunted her dreams these past years.

“I’m looking for Captain Jack Sparrow,” she tells the man at the bar.

He eyes her carefully. Her voice is suddenly crisp, authoritative — a voice that does not fit with the appearance she presents.

She doesn’t offer coin, not in a place like this. Seven years has taught her much of the world, and if Elizabeth can yet be said to be rash, she’s never been stupid. Instead, she shows him a generous glimpse of her bosoms, the slightest hint of rouged nipple, a promise in her eyes.

Show her the way to Captain Jack Sparrow, and perhaps, if he’s lucky, she’ll show this man a good time.

“Upstairs,” he grunts, and she smiles at him, careful not to display her perfect teeth in this imperfect world.

Her petticoats rustle around her legs as she climbs the rickety stairs. The raucous laughter of the taproom is gradually replaced by moaning and gasping and the whispering of threadbare sheets against bare skin.

She pauses in the corridor, confounded by the closed doors, the rising noise, the sin redolent in the air.

And then—

He’s there in front of her, coming out of one of the rooms, swaying slightly in that way she remembers so well, talking quietly to himself. His hands loop in strange, intricate patterns, and—

He hasn’t seen her yet.

For a moment, a mad instant, she thinks of turning back. Heading down the stairs, and out into the night. Finding berth on another ship and sailing for home. To Port Royale. To her father.

But she’ll never know where that path may have led her, because he’s seeing her now, and kohl eyes widen in recognition, even as arms extend in grandiose welcome.

“Well, now, if it isn’t the lovely Miss Elizabeth.”

There is no surprise, no hesitation despite the change in her circumstances, despite her sudden appearance in his life. And somehow, she herself is not surprised that this is so.

After all, he’s Jack.

It’s then that she becomes agonizingly aware of the crudeness of her dress, the travails of her journey ingrained in dirt and salt across her flesh, and the fact that Jack is wearing only britches with all that lovely beaded black hair.

She doesn’t correct him, though it’s been seven years since she’s been the Governor’s daughter. She merely looks down at her folded hands and wonders what to say.

Long nights before the decision was made — long nights in the planning — long nights in the execution.

And here she is in Tortuga, finally nearing the end of the long night that is her banal existence, and she is speechless in the face of plans fulfilled.

Thin moonlight streams through the casement at the end of the corridor. All around them are the sounds of passion. Jack moves closer until she can smell the spiced rum on his breath and the sweet tang of his sweat.

She catches a flash of his dark, dark eyes. She cannot read them. His head dips towards hers, skating past so he can drop a single word in her ear.

“Dead?”

“Indeed.” She stares straight ahead; voice steady, hands trembling. “Bandits. Two years ago. On the road. Another coach … an attack. He was … helping.” On the road. Not a pirate after all.

There’s a silence between them. She can feel his breath ghosting warm against her cheek. She turns. Inches separate.

“And you’ve come to Captain Jack.” He tilts his head and regards her with a faint smile.

“Yes.”

There’s a sudden noise, and someone bursts out of the room beside them. Quick as anything, Jack has her in his arms, and he’s spinning her hard against the wall.

Bawdy laughter, the creaking of the stairs, and the corridor is once again empty.

She’s trapped in a prison of his arms, hard chest blocking her way. Breathlessly she looks up into his face. “I’ve been looking for you, Jack,” she tells him.

Again, the faintest of smiles; the unreadable eyes.

“And you’ve found him. Captain Jack Sparrow of the Black Pearl. At your service.”

“Are you?”

There’s an eloquent pause. “Am I what?” Puzzlement.

Ah, this is the man she remembers. “At my service.” She can feel the confidence; it’s there, underneath all this grief, and pain, and confusion.

His teeth flash white and gold. He leans in until their noses are touching and the silver rings on his knuckles brush a line across her cheekbones.

“Dunno, luvey. Depends on what you want with old Captain Jack.”

She draws a shaking breath, and a bubble of hilarity within her grows. “Will you take me on your ship?”

“An’ why would I do that?” One hand comes up between them, and she slaps it away, mildly.

Because it’s all I’ve dreamt of since my husband died. Because I’ve lost his love, and I’ll lose myself if I go on the way I’ve been going. Because of a moonlit night, seven years ago, on a white-sand beach. Because I miss it, all of it.

“For old times’ sake.”

He cocks his head. “In my bed?” His lips hover above hers.

“Dunno, luvey.” She imitates his lazy, rolling drawl, and twists away under his elbow, to stand beside him. “Don’t recall that being part of the old times.”

He laughs. “Right, then. But you’ll listen to me, savvy? Part of my crew.” He wrinkles his nose, taking in her dishevelled appearance, blithely unaware of his own dishabille. “An' you’ll find some better gear, heh?”

She’s come to Tortuga looking for Captain Jack Sparrow. And she’s found him.

When dawn breaks, arm in arm they walk, back down to the docks, toward the sea.


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[info]eliade

July 14 2003, 20:53:22 UTC 8 years ago

Awww. I just saw this movie--*just* got home from it. Your icon makes me go glassy-eyed and I agree with all your comments:

drugged and sexy and swishy!

Huzzah, indeed. (Which makes me think of MST3K. Heh.)

When I heard there were already mailing lists and stuff for the movie I was rolling my eyes, but... yeah. I get it now. {g} Orlando Bloom was quite the Errol Flynn, wasn't he? And Keira Knightley was, um, kind of an updated Brooke Shields, but better. At least better plucked. And I just want to lick Johnny Depp, as always.

It was a weird movie. It wasn't what I think of as slashy, but it was very very gay.

[info]circe_tigana

July 14 2003, 21:01:07 UTC 8 years ago

Hee! Watch out! Jackfic is HIGHLY addictive :)

When I heard there were already mailing lists and stuff for the movie I was rolling my eyes, but... yeah. I get it now. {g}

I saw it yesterday, and I'm in love with Jack Sparrow. It's sad, but it's true. Yet I suspect that this will be shortlived ... pics and fics cannot do that character justice as the brilliant Johnny played him. It's all about the swaying and the hand gestures :)

It was a weird movie. It wasn't what I think of as slashy, but it was very very gay.

Ah, it's a manly life on the seven seas. All those men. And bare chests. And snaggled teeth. *snerk*


[info]spicedrum

July 14 2003, 20:55:49 UTC 8 years ago

In some interview or another, Johnny mentioned that he based Captain Sparrow on Keith Richards and Pepe Le Pew.

Just think on that for a second. I'll wait.

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bwaahaahaahaaahaa!

::hearts Johnny Depp even more::

You can actually see it in the movement, though, the Keith Richards bit, the careless waving of the arms, the not caring what everybody else is doing becuase he's having so much fun.

and on to the snippet, a question:

Jack moves closer until she can smell the spiced rum on his breath and the sweet tang of his sweat.

How does Elizabeth know what I smell like, hmmmm?

*g*

It's all about the hand movements, the way that he seems clumsy in his staggering, yet is actually so graceful. Also, the cheekbones don't hurt one bit. mmmm Want to lick them.

[info]circe_tigana

July 14 2003, 21:04:34 UTC 8 years ago

Yes, I had read that article. And he was totally doing Keith Richards, and Ozzy Osbourne and all of them! :)

How does Elizabeth know what I smell like, hmmmm?

LOL! That was just for you :) She assumed, correctly of course, that you were the woman in the room at the inn ;)

::waits patiently for icons::

[info]spicedrum

8 years ago

[info]rashaka

July 15 2003, 01:19:24 UTC 8 years ago

and Pepe Le Pew.

...



...

Heeehheeeeehahhaahaahahahaha!

That just about... :snicker:... made my evening.

[info]spicedrum

8 years ago

[info]spicedrum

8 years ago

[info]blondeheroine

July 14 2003, 21:17:17 UTC 8 years ago

First off, sorry to intrude. I had been complaining about finding only Jack bangin' Will fic and no one else to WrittenInStars and she pointed me to your journal.

Secondly, I'm glad she did because now I'm going to have Jack in my head all night saying, "Dunno, luvey. Depends on what you want with old Captain Jack.”. *shudders - in a good way*

Crap. I've been overtaken by pirate lust. What the hell am I supposed to do now? :p

[info]circe_tigana

July 14 2003, 21:26:40 UTC 8 years ago

No intrusion :) Welcome to the pirate lust!

While I definitely think Jack may have been more into slash than, ahem, Elizabeth, I doubt I'll write it. Probably no romance, actually. Will and Elizabeth were just too callow for him!

I'm glad you enjoyed this -- thanks for letting me know :)

Crap. I've been overtaken by pirate lust. What the hell am I supposed to do now? :p

Read my other story, of course: http://www.livejournal.com/users/circe_tigana/72218.html



[info]muzakgurrl

July 14 2003, 22:41:53 UTC 8 years ago

Excellent, excellent story! Love that he is the one she goes to after Will dies. Hee. I love my Captain Jack.

He cocks his head. “In my bed?” His lips hover above hers.

I can only hope that there will be some kind of continuation of the story, with a nod to that particular line. ;)

[info]circe_tigana

July 15 2003, 05:39:58 UTC 8 years ago

Hee! We'll see :)

Thanks!

[info]voleuse

July 14 2003, 23:42:26 UTC 8 years ago

“In my bed?” His lips hover above hers.

Rrrrawr.

[info]circe_tigana

July 15 2003, 05:40:29 UTC 8 years ago

LOL! :)

[info]rashaka

July 15 2003, 01:17:03 UTC 8 years ago

::glomps:: I wuv you. You write me perfect Jack!fic. Do you have any Elizabeth/William fic?

btw, did you finish Bebop? I've got some recs to send your way...

[info]circe_tigana

July 15 2003, 05:44:44 UTC 8 years ago

btw, did you finish Bebop? I've got some recs to send your way...

::whines::

No! Because I didn't want it to get polluted by this Jack obsession. I'm planning on watching the last ep tonight, though, so certainly send on recs!

And I'm glad you like the Jack-fic, oh insidious moon princess ;)

[info]drujan

July 15 2003, 06:41:43 UTC 8 years ago

Ooooh! This was great. I was so disappointed when the movie ended with Liz (or Will) NOT joining Jack in his adventures. I like your ending better. :-)

“Dunno, luvey. Depends on what you want with old Captain Jack.”

::lick::

I saw the movie on Friday, and I am totally in love with Jack. I must go see it again.

[info]circe_tigana

July 15 2003, 07:20:23 UTC 8 years ago

Hi, thanks for letting me know you liked it! :)

I, too, must see this movie again!

[info]thenyxie

July 15 2003, 07:54:58 UTC 8 years ago

TEASE! :) Write smut, dammit! I'm dying for some good, yummy Captain Jack smut, and here you are, a Goddess of smut, and you tease me!

Tell ya something, though. Prior to seeing this movie, I would read slash, even find it hot if it was well-written, but it wasn't anything I'd go seeking out. Now look at me. Consumed with Pirate lust and dying not only for Jack smut, but Jack SLASH. Slash has become yummy and seek-worthy in every fandom form (especially Pirates), and it's all his fault. You're an expert ;) Tell me! How does this happen?

[info]circe_tigana

July 15 2003, 08:21:03 UTC 8 years ago

Hehe, my first instinct upon watching the movie was that Jack would be a slashy kind of guy. But having said that, I get the distinct impression he'll sway whichever way the wind blows him, if you get my meaning :)

Will I write Jacksmut? Maybe. Will I write Jack/Will slash? Definitely not. Will is not the man for him.

[info]thenyxie

8 years ago

[info]thenyxie

8 years ago

[info]noshootingstars

July 15 2003, 08:13:46 UTC 8 years ago

You are a goddess. Honestly, I have to worship you for this beautiful fic. Your Jack is so right-on.

Now I must be a girly-girl and have daydreams about Jack pressing me against a wall. ;)

[info]circe_tigana

July 15 2003, 08:23:00 UTC 8 years ago

Awww, thanks Riddering.

::licks you for the heady compliment::

What I love is that he can come out of a whore's boudoir, and she'll (we'll) still want him.

Swish on, Captain Jack. Swish on.

[info]thenyxie

July 15 2003, 08:36:36 UTC 8 years ago

Dammit! Did I neglect to compliment your writing during my petulant whining for smut? *grin*

This is awesome. Dead sexy and dead-on characterization. So very believable, too! I can so see Elizabeth doing this after Will's death.

That kicked ass, savvy? ;)

[info]circe_tigana

July 15 2003, 09:18:00 UTC 8 years ago

Hee! Thanks :)

And allow me to compliment you on your honey ;)

[info]thenyxie

8 years ago

[info]silveraspen

July 15 2003, 12:19:58 UTC 8 years ago

Followed a link over from [info]spicedrum and I'm so glad I did. Spot-on characterization and wonderful imagery; I loved this story and will be scrolling back down your journal looking for more.

(There will be more, right? Right?)

:)

[info]circe_tigana

July 15 2003, 12:37:36 UTC 8 years ago

Thanks, Aspen :)

There's only one other (I only saw the movie two days ago!!!), but I'm thinking of trying a Jack POV if I write another.

[info]myriad69

July 24 2003, 06:35:59 UTC 8 years ago

Again, I'm one of the last to read this and offer comments, but I just saw the moving picture today, saavy?

And this made my heart skip a beat, have a tear in my eye for the loss of Will, and I believed every word.

[info]cbking

August 1 2003, 19:25:05 UTC 8 years ago

Brilliant. Great Elizabeth voice, and the swoony swishiness of CJS was perfect. This fandom might be short-lived, but I'm loving it while there's still time.
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